tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171741674155849799.post2861405318057618914..comments2023-04-17T12:31:53.729+01:00Comments on an open field: I Dream of Speaking ItalianLynne Reeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11852192697142140025noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171741674155849799.post-60804241051934674842010-02-11T15:54:04.958+00:002010-02-11T15:54:04.958+00:00Thanks, Adelaide. This was actually a dream I had ...Thanks, Adelaide. This was actually a dream I had - very strange! And I couldn't shake it out of my head so it ended up on the page. I wanted the long sentence to try and mirror the dream state, when things just all run into each other, so I'm pleased you like that.Lynne Reeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11852192697142140025noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171741674155849799.post-1792159583909492382010-02-11T15:04:24.211+00:002010-02-11T15:04:24.211+00:00Hi Lynne,
I like the rambling, run-on sentences, ...Hi Lynne,<br /><br />I like the rambling, run-on sentences, so like internal thinking. It works well the way you do it. I've never tried that.<br /><br />AdelaideAdelaidehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01807278813737986532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171741674155849799.post-30230869028654610602010-02-10T19:00:15.777+00:002010-02-10T19:00:15.777+00:00Thank you Heloisa. The fact that you say you'r...Thank you Heloisa. The fact that you say you're not an expert but still really like it means even more to me : )) I hope my work can appeal to as many people as possible regardless of what they know or don't know. Thanks again for taking the time to post.Lynne Reeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11852192697142140025noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171741674155849799.post-18737529407312540382010-02-09T23:46:40.514+00:002010-02-09T23:46:40.514+00:00BEAUTIFUL!!!
I like very much this genre of poetr...BEAUTIFUL!!!<br /><br />I like very much this genre of poetry. However, I am not an "expert"!Heloisa B.Phttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18165836381544189930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171741674155849799.post-71539465728103701082009-12-09T17:32:30.638+00:002009-12-09T17:32:30.638+00:00Thank you so much, Jem. It was an experiment so I ...Thank you so much, Jem. It was an experiment so I was really pleased that Modern Haiku took it. I'm also generally experimenting on shifts between haiku and prose too and this is the first time I've tried a 'read-on' between the end of the prose and the first line of the haiku. Glad you liked it.Lynne Reeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11852192697142140025noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171741674155849799.post-3628462944278378062009-12-09T10:46:06.686+00:002009-12-09T10:46:06.686+00:00This is great Lynne. I love the conversational to...This is great Lynne. I love the conversational tone to it. A real rambling on, but so engaging. And then that cut to the haiku. <br /><br />I always get a pleasant shake-up when I visit your site. I always go away thinking of new things to try.jemhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08181038873568527264noreply@blogger.com