tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171741674155849799.post6348780028713135421..comments2023-04-17T12:31:53.729+01:00Comments on an open field: haibun: death, life, life, life, lifeLynne Reeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11852192697142140025noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171741674155849799.post-68358986980048550532015-03-11T13:07:34.485+00:002015-03-11T13:07:34.485+00:00Thank you, Jackie.Thank you, Jackie.Lynne Reeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11852192697142140025noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171741674155849799.post-83916551486490481902015-03-11T11:05:34.029+00:002015-03-11T11:05:34.029+00:00I like it much too. I enjoy boundary pushing when...I like it much too. I enjoy boundary pushing when it is gentle, maybe subtle, but the 'push' is neverless firm, as you have done. Jackie Biggshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17592452042428550380noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171741674155849799.post-50111671202180559592015-03-10T22:20:17.362+00:002015-03-10T22:20:17.362+00:00It becomes dreamlike, mysterious, but something on...It becomes dreamlike, mysterious, but something one is able to go with, without feeling puzzled, but just carried. I really like it!Carolinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00501080789846670357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171741674155849799.post-83986949345338544752015-03-10T18:05:54.049+00:002015-03-10T18:05:54.049+00:00Thank you! Haibun is traditionally prose and haiku...Thank you! Haibun is traditionally prose and haiku (one or more). I'm pushing the boundaries a little, I suppose, by playing with format on the page, separating certain phrases that act as links between the sections. But, one of the aims of haibun is to create links and shifts between prose and poetry so creating extra ones feels appropriate. It's a kind of collage form, I guess. And I played with it more in 'forgiving the rain' too. <br /><br />Really pleased you like it - it feels more experimental than others I've written. xx Lynne Reeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11852192697142140025noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171741674155849799.post-45180129806544868412015-03-10T17:58:25.235+00:002015-03-10T17:58:25.235+00:00I like this so much! Is the whole format called a...I like this so much! Is the whole format called a haibun?Carolinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00501080789846670357noreply@blogger.com