tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171741674155849799.post7827080205170520816..comments2023-04-17T12:31:53.729+01:00Comments on an open field: What’s UnsaidLynne Reeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11852192697142140025noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171741674155849799.post-75090664152587111542007-11-23T12:13:00.000+00:002007-11-23T12:13:00.000+00:00Thanks jem. Being much more a poet than a prose wr...Thanks jem. Being much more a poet than a prose writer I find I work a lot with concrete images, trying to make them so much more than themselves, significant and suggestive not just descriptive. They're not always easy to find though... ;-)Lynne Reeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11852192697142140025noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171741674155849799.post-10453559980437118842007-11-23T12:09:00.000+00:002007-11-23T12:09:00.000+00:00Thanks for commenting, Caroline. Yes, it's in this...Thanks for commenting, Caroline. Yes, it's in this November's issue of Blue Tattoo, though I haven't seen it yet. The haibun (prose and haiku) generally tends to deal with 'life-story' so it's a bit of an experiment to play around with fiction and still aim for a resonance with the haiku. Glad you enjoyed it.Lynne Reeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11852192697142140025noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171741674155849799.post-15725958810543437752007-11-23T11:42:00.000+00:002007-11-23T11:42:00.000+00:00Really enjoyed reading the story. Is it going to b...Really enjoyed reading the story. Is it going to be published in Blue Tattoo - a great little magazine?Caroline M Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01277831689690791429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6171741674155849799.post-30610462039140403142007-11-16T14:40:00.000+00:002007-11-16T14:40:00.000+00:00That last haiku is such a striking image. The way...That last haiku is such a striking image. The way an umbrella disembowels iteslf, showing its insides, like when someone has said too much and can't take it back.<BR/><BR/>Fantastic writing. Thanks for sharing.jemhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08181038873568527264noreply@blogger.com