Lynne Rees on haiku and haibun - creative and critical
a rhyming haiku.:)...about aging and remembrance. I imagine running on a beach.
well spotted : ) I hope it's not too overt a rhyme, although the sense of 'lullaby' was something I wanted to suggest too. Thanks for posting.
We get older. We understand. Day by day. The sun goes its way. Very haiku. Nice one.Best wishesRalf
Thank you so much for commenting, Ralf.
a marvellous haiku - beautiful
Thanks, Dave : )