Tuesday

sunset over the sea
I remember when my mother
ran faster than me


Blithe Spirit Volume 20 No.3

6 comments:

  1. a rhyming haiku.

    :)

    ...about aging and remembrance. I imagine running on a beach.

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  2. well spotted : ) I hope it's not too overt a rhyme, although the sense of 'lullaby' was something I wanted to suggest too. Thanks for posting.

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  3. We get older. We understand. Day by day. The sun goes its way. Very haiku. Nice one.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  4. Thank you so much for commenting, Ralf.

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