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sunset over the sea
I remember when my mother
ran faster than me


Blithe Spirit Volume 20 No.3

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  1. Pacze Moj5 October 2010 at 07:58

    a rhyming haiku.

    :)

    ...about aging and remembrance. I imagine running on a beach.

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  2. Lynne Rees5 October 2010 at 09:41

    well spotted : ) I hope it's not too overt a rhyme, although the sense of 'lullaby' was something I wanted to suggest too. Thanks for posting.

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  3. Ralf Bröker10 October 2010 at 20:13

    We get older. We understand. Day by day. The sun goes its way. Very haiku. Nice one.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  4. Lynne Rees11 October 2010 at 14:35

    Thank you so much for commenting, Ralf.

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  5. Dave Serjeant3 November 2010 at 00:53

    a marvellous haiku - beautiful

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  6. Lynne Rees3 November 2010 at 09:57

    Thanks, Dave : )

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