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july river 1

the sun's heat
in a ripe plum
cicadas
cicadas

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  1. Lovely way to start your July stones. The (French) summer has been captured!

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  2. I heard my first cicada just last night. And now I have a to go- because a small stone just dropped into my head! Have a great July and thank you for joining my small stones blog.

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  3. Just lovely, Lynne. I found myself nodding my head along to this one. I did part of my growing up on an orchard and this captures it perfectly :)

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  4. Love the repetition of cicadas at the end...very expressive stone.

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  5. Hello old friends, new friends : )
    and thanks for popping in here. x

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