Tuesday, July 19, 2011

july river 19

thunder clap
I think about
the promises
he won't keep

4 comments:

  1. I like the opposition you create in this poem. It poses many questions.

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  2. Another dry thunder storm, evocative of so many disappointments.

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  3. It is very difficult to write something new each day but you are going great guns; very impressed. Good luck with the river of stones project...

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  4. Thanks so much for commenting - it's lovely meeting new people in the river.

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