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river 2012 - 6

after the storm
a squeeze of sunlight
through the bare trees
I salute a magpie

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  1. thank you for your kind words yesterday.


    enjoyed reading this today.

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  2. Thank you, Rosemary and Jennifer. Having fun and discovering things I didn't know I wanted to say - the river is always good for that!

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  3. You have a fine collection of stones! How did I miss that you were in the River? I salute you.

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  4. Hi teri - good to catch up with you again!

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